The dark arts. Amirite?
the dork arts
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Now I have to go look at Melissa Benoist naked again
emperor of DKB or something
There it isn't (taken down). That ass shot is amazing.
I love the leading girl. Good actress, adorable, sexy, goofy sense of humour.
Ray basically took my concept and my various demands and wrote it in a way that it's kind of safe for a more general audience rather than just dirty minded fucks like myself. It's actually a pretty funny script at parts, so Ray gets a thumbs up for that.
Still, I wish I had been there to personally over-see the project. Criticisms:
-Lighting
-Fight choreography. I don't have much experience with fight choreography but I'm positive I could do a better job. For one thing, I wouldn't have all those weird transitions, it would have been one continuous fight.
-Wish the first scene was longer, more drawn out. Could have happily watched 20 minutes of Supersam as a degraded slave, trying to please with a smile on her face.
-Would have liked a reaction shot of Sam while she was on all fours. The ass shot is amazing, but I think a reaction shot would have really added a lot.
-The other girl, Lisa, she's hot but she looks kind of bored.
Still, over-all I am happy.
"I'm totally your play thing", "I'll degrade myself and dance for you", fuck yeah.
Last edited by KaineDamo; 09-06-2015 at 07:41 PM.
You kinda scare me sometimes buddy
I'm assuming this is pretty NSFM?
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